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Mist

There was nothing to see but only mist Running here and there, and grabbing the trees Oh, my feelings, there were many to list. Giving mystical look, shrouding the trees An owl’s screech, then a squirrel’s panic twists Gazing higher, saw pretty eyes with glee In misty clouds lingering on a breeze Of sweet times, I saw the path and fears ceased. +++ August 27, 2014 Form: Ottava Rima Dr. Ram Mehta Contest: Mist by nette onclaud **I missed the contest**

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Date: 8/28/2014 10:56:00 AM
Very fine write Dr Ram! Good luck to u!
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Date: 8/27/2014 11:15:00 PM
Hey Doc, interesting piece, but using the word "trees" twice? Especially to rhyme? RWG
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Robert Gruhn
Date: 8/27/2014 11:40:00 PM
ok, accepted, but, mist and list, trees and trees, that is rhyming! RWG
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 8/27/2014 11:19:00 PM
No, those are two different expressions,

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