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Missing You

You promised you'd never break my heart never make me cry rather die than live without me. You broke that promise broke my heart, made me cry you have gone and left me rather, I'm the one without you. Early mornings I sit on the deck coffee and your favorite biscuits my company and memories hover on the border of pain. Thin fog floats lazily over the marina faint mist is a curtain peeling back a palest shade of blue translucent as my sense of unhappiness that's taking a long time dying. Before remembrance vanishes I savor this luxury of missing you.
@jjote 080215

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/2/2015 11:55:00 AM
I feel you, Josefina. We get hurt, we cry, and yet we still miss that person. Good write.
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Josefina Costales
Date: 8/4/2015 7:44:00 AM
you're right. the years may go by but still at the back of your mind the memories can pop up and linger on
Date: 8/2/2015 10:13:00 AM
Yes, missing someone can feel like that. A 7. Kind regards, Julia
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Josefina Costales
Date: 8/4/2015 7:45:00 AM
Thanks Julia for dropping by

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