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"missing the Sound"

A black bird sings free to a crowd that doesn't here, and now fly's away...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 9:56:00 PM

this is the poem that made me fall in love with your poetry...I still recall everything about it... xox~pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2010 3:35:00 AM

Great free entertainment that they totally missed by not listening for the minute..So sad that they did not hear what was sung..Great write and presentation...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 7:54:00 AM

Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Michael. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2010 7:48:00 PM

Yes, difference between hearing and but not "listening." I enjoyed this. Luv, Andrea

Earle Brown

Date: 8/29/2010 2:50:00 PM

We often take thing for granted. A simple but meaningful write.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/29/2010 11:06:00 AM

Michael, I will tell you a little story about a black bird. It sang and moved up to freely in this world. The crowd could not hear the true meaning of her song. Blinded by deaf where they stood. The next thing you know the bird had 2 fly away when she was exposed. One good things about poetry is when the reader can use their own imagination and think opposite of the poet. I am sure the beauty of your haiku has nothing to do with my bird. Enjoyed my view and image as well. luv,..p.d.