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Miss You

Inspired by the song Fix You by Coldplay My hand on my chest because my heart bleeds, Taking breath after breath, but I still can't breathe, When I close my eyes, you're all I see, That's when it hurts... While my nights seem long, my days stay gray, And I force a smile but it just won't stay, My thoughts of you are killing me today, Feels like I'm cursed... Bright has died, and gone, Dark and night, are home, And I still cry, and miss you. I'm all out of love, My heart beats slow, I look up above, and feel so low, Footprints on my heart And I let them show, What I feel worth... Bright has died, and gone, Dark and night, are home, And I still cry, and miss you. Still dreams, about your face, Images of what I cannot erase, Still dreams, about your face, I cry... Still dreams, about your face, Memories of every warming embrace, Still dreams, about your face, I cry.. Bright has died, and gone, Dark and night, are home, And I still cry, and miss you.

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Date: 12/15/2012 9:35:00 PM
nicely worded,,,, though it's sad .
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Date: 11/21/2012 10:16:00 PM
AUDONUS,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 3/26/2012 8:48:00 AM
Such beautiful sadness Audonus..thank you for the lovely comment you left on my limerick xxx Hugs
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Date: 3/26/2012 6:10:00 AM
Time heals wound, you'll see!!!! Lovely poem....^_^
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Date: 3/26/2012 2:31:00 AM
Hartbreak, but sweet and romantic poem Audonus. Like it alot, well done. - Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/26/2012 2:54:00 AM
Thank you so much! I enjoyed writing it. I'll be sure to check out your work and return the love as soon as I find more than a minute. Glad you enjoyed

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