Miss Call

loving vibration media of hand set makes communication until response there gives miss call after miss call if no reply....ugh For contest: in show me the Funny

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Harry Horsman

Date: 7/9/2013 11:48:00 PM

clever poetry is this, and a joy to have read it.....

Anne Rutherford

Date: 7/8/2013 12:30:00 PM

Glad to see someone else can't miss a call. I'm the same. Good luck with this in the contest. Well written poem. Anne

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/8/2013 12:57:00 PM

Thanks a lot. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/8/2013 10:57:00 AM

- You will receive a response ....... not easy to hide away in today's "mobile world" ..... no one go on a fishing trip without mobile phone today .... Well done bl. - Luck in contest !!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/8/2013 11:02:00 AM

Many thanks my friend for visiting my page and wishing me good luck with nice comment. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/8/2013 10:49:00 AM

i can't usually handle missed calls and this piece gives the theme a sense of urgency... beautifully done, bl.... right on!..;) huggs

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/8/2013 10:52:00 AM

Ha ha ha, firstly smile secondly laugh...ha ha ha, my dear friend. Thanks for early comment. Loved always, bl