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Started with the nonet and reversed it into an etheree

Within dancing swirls of mystery, an uncontrollable magic... Beauty with chaos contained, destructive forces tamed... Everlasting with rebirth... Jesus found. Found Jesus with rebirth. Everlasting... Destructive forces tamed, beauty with chaos contained. An uncontrollable magic within dancing swirls of mystery... (Lies stepping stones which guide us to His Gate.) Janet L Vick January 22, 201

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Judy Ball

Date: 2/13/2012 11:06:00 PM

Amen to that. Loved this piece paying tribute to His wonderful care and everlasting faithfulness. Been gone for awhile because my puter crashed. God Bless, JB

Janet Vick
Date: 6/2/2012 12:19:00 PM

thanks...glad you are back up. Janet

Judy Ball

Date: 1/27/2012 7:49:00 AM

I like this a lot. God Bless, JB

Janet Vick
Date: 2/4/2012 6:07:00 AM

Thank you Judy for stopping by. Take care. Janet