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How would it feel to wake up and look in the mirror and see that your face is a woman's? Prob pretty good, cause you wouldn't have to shave and you could paint up your new face any way ya wanna. How would it feel to wake up and look in the mirror and see that your face is dark chocolate colored? Prob pretty good cause it's such a beautiful color until you run out of gas after dark and have to walk the streets to a gas station knowin' the first cop sees ya will harass ya. How would it feel to wake up and look in the mirror and see the face of Jesus? Prob would be freak-out cause chances are Jesus don't look anything like how he's been pictured.

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Date: 11/7/2011 1:25:00 PM
Got a kick out of this one, Nancy! I wouldn't mind seeing a face of a different color, but what you said about the police has some truth to it. If I saw Christ's face in the mirror, I'd know I was in heaven looking at Him. Only the Shroud of Turin gives us an idea of how Jesus might have looked and the authenticity of the shroud has been debated by scientists. I think the spirit form of God, Jesus, angels would be hard to conceive. Great write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2011 12:30:00 PM
shakatttak.. the last lines bawled me, nans... love the way you handled this.. totally awed. whooo,:) huggs!
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Date: 11/7/2011 5:58:00 AM
I know what he looks like. You're taller. Tony
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Date: 11/6/2011 10:32:00 PM
Just dont think i have the power to say no like you ladies do...Jesus will have a few disbelievers, but he will sort the sheep from the goats:)
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Date: 11/6/2011 9:02:00 PM
Dear Nancy, I don't think I have Commented on YOUR POETRY before this is the First POEM I remember Commenting on, and What a Gem YOU have peaked my interest I Shall Return to read and Learn about YOU With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry ( HG )
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Date: 11/6/2011 7:00:00 PM
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Date: 11/6/2011 6:29:00 PM
FAQs?
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Date: 11/6/2011 6:41:00 PM
lol, yeah, duh!

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