Mine

I arch your back hold your chest kiss your neck you're mine submit submit I whisper now I know what you want you're mine kisses on your shoulders lean into me I'm strong I can take it all dont hold back you're mine.

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Aaron Crowley

Date: 8/24/2011 4:22:00 AM

oh I love this. I think I'll recite this to my lover! the sexuality is so erotic and arousing!

Veronica Joseph
Date: 8/24/2011 4:39:00 PM

thank you, what a lovely compliment.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/23/2011 3:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Veronica. Love, Carol

Veronica Joseph
Date: 8/24/2011 4:39:00 PM

thank you Carol, you are always so sweet and encouraging. I appreciate it.

Pawlu Pascarawlu

Date: 4/7/2009 6:47:00 AM

very nicely written, it really conveys passion.

Veronica Joseph
Date: 8/24/2011 4:40:00 PM

thank you!

Cheryl Mccall

Date: 4/6/2009 2:26:00 PM

very passionate Love this write

Veronica Joseph
Date: 8/24/2011 4:39:00 PM

Thank you so much. I loved writing it.