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Mine, but for how long?

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Mine, but for how long?


                      How you wait for me 
                    I love how you treat me
                   You make me feel comfortable
                  You hug me first thing in the morning                                                        
               Then you entertain me all the way to work,               
   I trust you so much, knowing you’ll shout if you get too much attention
  I don’t mind all the guys admiring you, lets be honest, that why were together
 Your curves are gorgeous, the lovely tan you display. You take me to great places.
I want us to be together forever, but you know as well as me, one day I’ll be trading you in.
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  1. Date: 4/4/2010 5:33:00 AM
    Clever poem Gareth, nice one >> James

  1. Date: 4/2/2010 11:37:00 AM
    Very cute shape poem, James. At first I thought I was reading about a woman, but of course then I scrolled down to read the rest and saw "the big picture." Great fun to read! Love, Carolyn