Mind Sea

Lifted from this day Borne by illusory wings It changes the stars So I will not find the way Journeying through the mind sea

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Abdiel Rios

Date: 10/30/2015 8:01:00 AM

Nice sea poem :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/22/2015 3:43:00 AM

- Hello Holly :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin

Date: 10/19/2015 12:48:00 PM

Yes. Seems the only way to get rid of the mind is though meditation. Congrats, daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/16/2015 8:00:00 AM

Holly, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 10/15/2015 10:21:00 PM

Hi Holly, I like the vast of thinking, Love this tanka. :) Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Holly Wood
Date: 10/15/2015 10:24:00 PM

Thank you very much. I appreciate the warm welcome and look forward to reading your work as well.