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'million Miles Away'

I haven’t felt like this before, Wishing I could go back, To that place where I didn't yearn for you Where all I felt was my heartbeat now all I feel is you and what I’ve become since you became a part of me – a part of my life You hastily left, With no reason why, Just a note to say I have to go You hastily left, With everything that made sense Yesterday seems like a million miles away 060320122003

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2012 6:38:00 AM

While stopping by to read your wonderful poetry I want to say thank you for the kind comments you have left on mine. I hope you have a beautiful weekend and find it full of inspiration Wilma. Love, Carol

Joseph May

Date: 3/20/2012 6:40:00 PM

nice poem, all our memories feel like yesterday,even if they were a million years apart.enjoyed it

James Fraser

Date: 3/11/2012 12:02:00 PM

A life in so few, superbly written by you. I have a feeling that you are going to be the grand master of this form. If it's for a contest, I so wish it well :) xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/8/2012 10:00:00 AM

so profound Wilma, to draw on life's experiences especially in poetic verse, is indeed worthwhile reading when you are the poet. harry

Daver Austin

Date: 3/7/2012 11:40:00 AM

Yes, that feeling of emptiness where nothing makes sense anymore. Good write, Wilma. LOve, daver

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/7/2012 10:42:00 AM

Wilma, it is always hard to break off a relationship, but if he left with no explanation, you are probably better off without him. As David said below, try to focus on the future. You have a great deal of strength within that you can channel. Great narrative! Love, Carolyn