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‘Migration” Honker’s song v shapes, shadowed images… southern trek

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Date: 10/22/2010 2:50:00 AM
Outstandingly beautiful a great imagery. This is really a Gem my friend. Congrats on its win also. I have posted a new Kawaali in Poetry/Song form and hope you would like it. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra....John freeman
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Date: 10/10/2010 10:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this great and interesting haiku;) hugs, Emilia
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, john
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:59:00 AM
john, congrats on your HM. I appreciate your trying to use the more modern style of haiku here and I loved the part "shadowed images." Thanks for supporting my contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:24:00 AM
Lovely images Moses. many congratulations for this one.
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Date: 10/2/2010 8:07:00 PM
You can almost see the birds. Keep 'em coming. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:44:00 AM
What an excellent write enjoyed reading John. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2010 1:03:00 PM
great poem :)
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Date: 9/30/2010 12:55:00 PM
honkers...from yonkers? LOL I like it!
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Date: 9/30/2010 12:03:00 PM
Very apt images and quite appropriate for the theme of this wonderful haiku, John
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