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Midnight's Song

Surge of soothing tones, Pacifies the moon to sleep: Silver lullabies.

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Date: 12/12/2009 4:34:00 PM

Love the idea of the last line--so peaceful. Such a fitting end to this haiku. Good use of imagery and personification for a creative perspective. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your prayers. Karen

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/6/2009 8:08:00 PM

pacifying the moon a great concept raul ..... very nice!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/3/2009 3:52:00 AM

Interesting Haiku. When we think anything else can't be said then something else is said. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Elaine George

Date: 12/3/2009 12:57:00 AM

WOW! WHAT AN IMAGE THIS BEAUTIFUL HAIKU EVOKES. THANK YOU FOR SHARING, RAUL. LAINIE

Marty Owens

Date: 12/2/2009 10:13:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your poetry tonight...Marty

James Peranteau

Date: 12/2/2009 5:30:00 PM

Just so poetic Raul ! Great Haiku !!! james

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/2/2009 12:30:00 PM

My eyelids are getting heavy now... Very nice write.Great flow Raul. God Bless... RdP

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/1/2009 1:50:00 PM

Beautiful imagery in this haiku, which is one of my favorite forms. I love the last line especially "Silver lullabies"... ~Juliane

Tyler Martin

Date: 12/1/2009 1:24:00 PM

Nice ending to a wonderful haiku.

Danielle Moreno

Date: 12/1/2009 1:22:00 PM

Great image of the ocean singing a lullaby to the moon.

Daniel Neal

Date: 12/1/2009 1:20:00 PM

You make these look so simple, amazing work.

Chris Goombi

Date: 12/1/2009 1:18:00 PM

Great last line, CG

Steve Edmonds

Date: 12/1/2009 1:15:00 PM

Great description of your pic.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/1/2009 11:33:00 AM

Wishing you a week blessed with love and inspiration Raul. I am thanking you for posting your excellent poetry which I have enjoyed reading today. Love, Carol