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Midnight Mass

There was a warmth in the snow at Christmas time Earlier we had finished our last class Steve asked if we were serving during the holidays I told him I’d see him at Midnight Mass About a half-hour walk from my house to the church On a bitter cold Christmas Eve night Snow was falling kind of heavy All the streets were white We were laughing and sliding going down the hill The road as slick as glass Steve fell and broke his glasses Better not be late for Midnight Mass We put our cassocks on and got ready Wait for the choir to sing The lens was in Steve’s pocket He couldn’t see a thing Steve went to the altar Where his candle was to be put When he went to set it down He missed the altar by a foot We finished up the service About one thirty in the morn And headed home to celebrate The day that Christ was born We were only kids then How quickly the years do pass I revive the memory each Christmas While attending Midnight Mass.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/12/2008 1:47:00 PM
My family belonged to an Episcopalian church; my kids were altar boys. On Christmas Eve the church was candlelit, and my kids played hand puppets on the alter walls... what memories! Thanks for sharing yours... Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 10/31/2008 4:18:00 PM
Your narratives are heartwarming. Lovely memories.
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Date: 10/14/2008 2:28:00 PM
You painted a beautiful picture of memories past Vince. A lovely write which brought a smile and brought back memories of days gone by. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/14/2008 11:45:00 AM
If I may, the 2nd to last line "revive" might be better as "relive" Okay that said, this is great. I love remembering my days of youth at Christmas time and you reminded me of when I was an acholyte, when we had to wear the cassock and surplus. Great memories. This flowed so well and gave so much lovely detail. Very well written. Michael
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Date: 10/13/2008 4:21:00 PM
Hello... I loved this poem.. funny and a nice memory...thanks for your comment on my poem.. soft like mittens.. constance
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Date: 10/6/2008 4:07:00 PM
You have painted in words a profound picture of your childhood memories, Vince -exceedingly charming and beautiful picture. A great write. I encourage you to read my poem The Paint Brush. Thanks a million for your heartwarming review of my poem The Musician featured this week. Mohammad
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Date: 10/3/2008 4:06:00 PM
So funny yet so poignant and nostalgic. You sure know how to write them. Well done. Love Heidie
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Date: 10/2/2008 9:53:00 PM
Vice most of the time your Poetry just sets me back in my seat and makes me just shake my head going man oh man and this one was at least double that - Some how over the course of things my favorites list got lost and I decided to just leave it that way because I love poetry and everyone who loves it and everybody would just be on the list but this poem is certainly one of my favorites I have evr read - Great job on this Vince - God Bless you and yours bro, Michael
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Date: 10/2/2008 12:59:00 PM
Some memories are just too precious to ever leave. What a joyous addition this one is to your holiday every year. I must admit I giggled at the thought of it. Excellent imagery. Sweet and nostalgic. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/2/2008 12:33:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece and his memory refreshing. I can see the images clearly and the fun enjoyed during that time frame. I like your use of figurative and descriptive language to illustrate the activities in the poem. The piece flows very well and has a touch of reverence and is uplifting. Thanks for your prayers during my surgery. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/2/2008 12:09:00 PM
Memories etched in our hearts forever...thanks for sharing, and making me smile:)......Always, Christy
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