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Midnight By Silent Lake

Like razorblades knowing the difference Midnight by silent lake Flat serene only birds Rustling in bushes Two eyes in a moonlit sky Amongst a million stars Life peace hope and My love, My honest love for you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/3/2013 6:27:00 PM
Hi Avi Welcome to the Soup. Your poems reach a side of me kept buried.......but I do see the sadness and ugliness out there and you let it know your'e awake up to it....well done. SuZ
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Date: 10/17/2013 8:36:00 PM
hi Avi, i like this free verse poem. very dreamy..... awesome and lovely imagery....SKAT
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Avi Cohen
Date: 10/17/2013 8:44:00 PM
Your avatar is forever embedded on my synapses with your pink presence time And time again! Thank uuuuuu Best wishes Avi

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