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Methuselah Loves Lazarus

I have lived for Thirty years Yet I feel antiquely old Aged and grey, my youthful fears That my Beauty may grow cold Am I as Awful as I appear? I've no more Suitors in the fold…

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Date: 8/28/2013 10:53:00 AM
Ha! Ha! Ha! I'm 51. Wanna trade? I remember my 34th birthday. My co-workers stood around and sang happy birthday to me. That was nearly 17 years ago. My, how time flies! Love your work!...Milt
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Date: 8/28/2013 12:11:00 PM
I cannot thank you enough for the kind words and compliments, Milt. Thank you for stopping by and checking out my little ditty :)
Date: 8/26/2013 4:38:00 PM
Nice Rhyme scheme. I'm the opposite, I am 52 and I still feel 32.
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Date: 8/26/2013 6:00:00 PM
Thanks, bud. I wrote that four years ago and Lord I feel even more ancient now lol
Date: 8/26/2013 1:34:00 PM
Not being in the fold , me a simple man - though I find this a piece gold !
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Date: 8/26/2013 1:36:00 PM
Hi, Nigel. Not quite sure what you mean, but I hope it's a compliment lol Thanks for dropping by :)

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