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Metamorphosis

Stepping through the veil she spied an oak, its branches scratching heaven's glow and anchored to the earth its twisted roots clawed deeply through the soil below. Embracing now its weathered bark she found her scrawny body stretched from stern to stem, her very blood the sap which seethed within and energized the giant denizen. She was at once the tomboy and the tree, photosynthesis and flesh and bone to reach the spheres, the bowels of earth both bodies joined, the fusion done.

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Date: 1/18/2016 12:35:00 PM
Metamorphosis. Keith I love this one. 'her scrawny body stretched from stern to stem' . Brilliant. Just wish I could write like that.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/18/2016 1:46:00 PM
Thanks Tony! much appreciated... Keith
Date: 1/17/2016 1:16:00 PM
One of my favourites... an adaptation of a short story, 'Piktor's Metamorphosis' by Hermann Hesse. Thanks so much! Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/17/2016 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Ilene! much appreciated... Keith. An adaptation of the short story 'Piktor's Metamorphosis by Hermann Hesse.
Date: 1/17/2016 1:10:00 PM
i especially love "the tomboy and the tree" line, keith, but the rest of the poem is also very interesting and thought-provoking...
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