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Message In the Bottle

The message in the bottle was not what I expected to see The glass so clear, vodka fetid within, the label beckoned to the buyer The cap torn off, insides drained, the droplets stained like weak bleak tea The promised dreams were nightmares, the vendor a stinking liar.

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Date: 1/14/2017 10:54:00 AM
A nightmare indeed for someone with their hopes up. You made me laugh. :) Dane Ann
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