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Message In a Bottle

I found it there, left by the morning tide A green bottle half buried in the sand With excitement I noted a paper inside Heart beating fast as I reached out my hand Feeling that somehow this had been planned "I am a poet, perhaps the last of my kind, On an endless sea of words I am adrift Are they all gone now? Can I not find, Those who use words as a wonderful gift? I sit waiting for the winds of poetry to shift.." Opening my eyes to sunshine on my face Remembering night's dream once again Going back to that strange time and place I knew I would think of it now and then Gathered my thoughts and took up my pen

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Date: 1/8/2013 2:41:00 PM
barbara, , stopping by to say hi and read your winning poem in CATIE'S ""Message in a Bottle "'' contest~ nice poem to read. have yourself a good day. always & forever ~LINDA
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Date: 1/5/2013 7:16:00 PM
The last verse is stunning and beautiful (The other two ain't bad either!)...Congrats and have a blessed 2013, Barbara - Tim
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Date: 12/30/2012 6:57:00 PM
Happy New Yr to u, Barbara..the angle u took with this contest entry was excellent...I felt drawn in to your first person narrative instantly...then all the way to the end...congrats on this win...excellent creativity displayed!! gwendolen
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Date: 12/30/2012 5:25:00 PM
I have often felt like this :) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/29/2012 7:30:00 PM
Barbara, congrats ~SKAT
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Date: 12/29/2012 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,,,Mehnaz
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Date: 12/29/2012 9:14:00 AM
Loved this Barbara........and although lately I have not taken up my pen, it gives me inspiration to come back and try my own hand again. This is comforting. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/29/2012 5:04:00 AM
Congratulations on you winning spot Barbara love xx
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Date: 12/16/2011 10:16:00 PM
This was very imaginative, Barbara. WAs it for some contest here?
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Date: 12/16/2011 8:48:00 PM
what a grand poem! bravo!
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