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Mental S

Yeah I know the names is tooken already, you know the Diiamond mine has two eyes, no it doesn't mean I'm watching you; actually it means your watching me like an owl on its night prowl. If it was up to me I'd rob everyone of you blind, and then return it back to you Nothing like practice No...... I'm talking bout your sadness I would stick up your bad day and steal your sadness, I think like the wolves on the nature channel, or the lions always got make an example out of some punk a-- hyennas Mental s You know like the grass is green I like grass The workers are tired I hate to work But I will work over your private safe while your on vacation I'm good at it well not me a friend of mine, I'm good planning things out like keepimg the dog happy while he work on ya safe--- LOL LOL Mental s You ever see the guy in the movie need that rush in life to fully live the perfect woman? she loves to role play Over night I'm an actor, she gives midnight awards for my prospectives with positions look up kinky my face is there. Mental s PLEASE READ!! Thanks guys for these comments and I want to say.. sometimes I have no idea where this stuff comes from, I wrote this lsat year as an exercise piece for a short story, but I'm talking directly to you but its not intended for you, in the book up to this point the charactor is standing around some vuluable things and hes thinking to himself. Its my style of writing My alter ego is... wow!!! Thanks guys and have a great morning.

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Date: 8/20/2010 7:45:00 AM
Yes! Love it! "I would stick up your bad day and steal your sadness" think I'm gonna cry.......
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Date: 8/19/2010 5:30:00 PM
I really enjoyed your poem. Thank you for your comment on mine. Jerri
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Date: 8/4/2010 3:22:00 PM
Diiamond, enjoyed your poem, you seem to be in a much better condition than me,..p.d.
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Date: 8/4/2010 3:10:00 AM
DR, for the reader, immensely enjoyed the creative leaps of association that reward us with delightfully imaginative escapades! well done! will check out your popular "criminal" series when I have more time after work tonite! gotta go feed about 400 pp...I'm in the deli-business! jimbo
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Date: 8/3/2010 11:14:00 PM
I like the satirical humor in this poem, Diiamond. I've been called "kinky" too. Enjoyed your poem! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 8/3/2010 9:47:00 PM
It's cool
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