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Memory of a Past Lover

She was my first true lover our love was as an outlaw not adhering to any set of rules in the age of free love, we loved for free... From German Town she came coming to triumph over the sun in the stage of my life that was the moon for my life was early to rise... The night was our secret river loving beneath the heavens up to the pyre she the star of more fertile fire lover of lovers unleashing radiant desire... When our souls first met it seemed like only seconds to say hello and kiss when she left it took forever to say goodbye... Shadow of death on my unfortunate lyre in fathomless echos I cried out her name death of our physicality, death of the flame only black tears the shade of my pen... She came from where red is the Eastern veil where deepest seas entomb her light Erica came like the sun to travel so far then chose to span the world in godless flight...

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Date: 11/12/2013 2:57:00 AM
Life is tinged with sadness, isn't it. Yet, beauty and love never really die. Great write, Ken
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Date: 11/12/2013 7:08:00 AM
Hi Eileen Thank you my friend.. Ken
Date: 11/11/2013 1:48:00 PM
First love is something one never forgets! I especially liked the line about the "Eastern veil" Very evocative work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/11/2013 1:53:00 PM
Hey Matt, thanks for stopping by today. Ken
Date: 11/11/2013 12:33:00 PM
Another beautiful poem. Sometimes the past should stay in the past so we can enjoy the present. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 11/11/2013 12:40:00 PM
Buen Dia lucilla, Gracias por leer! Respecto, Ken
Date: 11/11/2013 9:50:00 AM
how sentimental can this get, ken.. something unforgettable like love past or done remains in the deep recesses of the soul... a most defining work leaving me breathless!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/11/2013 12:10:00 PM
Hi Nette, So wonderful to read from you today! ken
Date: 11/10/2013 5:10:00 PM
they say we never forget our first love... really liked this poem from you...so much beauty within this poem :)
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Date: 11/10/2013 5:20:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Always a delight to read from you! Ken
Date: 11/10/2013 3:37:00 PM
Certain emotion of sadness that I feel in this one..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 11/10/2013 3:39:00 PM
Hi Sara, Thank you for visiting...Just a pleasant "blast from the past" reminiscing.. Ken
Date: 11/10/2013 1:17:00 PM
- Memories of Erica you will never forget ... - Beautiful poem Ken. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/10/2013 1:20:00 PM
Hi Anne, Thank you for a wonderful visit today! Ken

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