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Memory, a Diary-Win

A Festival celebrations vacation was on And a pleasure to go swimming every morn With friends to the open Arabian sea. Noticed a war-ship anchored onto the sea. Hey, buddy, let’s go up to the ship there And let’s see who comes first to the shore. As we were about to approach the ship Saw some soldiers pointing guns at us. Fled like a frightened fish seeking the shore Forgetting who reached first and who the last. A word went round the town as of caution As it was the time of the Second World War. Nothing happened for the next few days And the ship had gone one fine morning. But we learnt the lesson of how to swim Against the tide and also with the tide. I carry about with me this diary as a treasure As the lasting perfume, not as a past pleasure ============================ Dr. Ram Mehta 3rd place win in Contest: Free Verse by P.D.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/23/2013 2:34:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Doc! :)
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Date: 10/23/2013 1:02:00 PM
Dr. :) Enjoyed your free verse win.......... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/23/2013 10:32:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:21:00 AM
the memories tucked in the folds of one's mind seem to come out in the best of poems...congrats on your win with this gem :)
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Date: 10/22/2013 7:39:00 AM
- Congrats on the win in the contest, Dr. Ram ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/22/2013 7:08:00 AM
loved the walk of memories you took us on congrats on a fine win Shadow x smile
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Date: 10/21/2013 2:49:00 PM
A very interesting poem. Sometimes, not all of our memories are good ones. Great work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the nice comments.
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Date: 10/21/2013 2:33:00 PM
Powerful experiences and memories are not always so sweet. Great write :) Congrats on your win !
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Date: 10/21/2013 11:35:00 AM
wow, a very interesting memory ;) congratulations on your awesome win friend Ram ;) cheers!! :)
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Date: 10/21/2013 10:34:00 AM
Such a powerful memory this is. Very intense .....congratulations on your win, and thank you for sharing!
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Date: 10/21/2013 9:28:00 AM
Great entry. Congratulations on your winning placement. CTB
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Date: 10/21/2013 8:32:00 AM
congrats on your win Ram
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Date: 10/20/2013 11:01:00 PM
congrats Dr. Ram.
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Date: 10/20/2013 9:10:00 PM
Hello Dr RAm, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "FREE VERSE" contest <----- Had fun reading your WIN!! If you'd like:-) Enjoy my latest blog! "THE FOOL" :) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17055&PoetID=18720 xoxox-------take care & enjoy your coming week. <3 Linda <3
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Date: 10/12/2011 12:58:00 AM
this sounds like a fun time from your youth. You have much to write from your life experiences, Dr. Ram. I hope you stay here at Soup. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:14:00 PM
Dr. Ram, I enjoyed the read, and am happy to hear that the soldiers spared you & buddy to live on and write for us. ;-)
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Date: 7/9/2011 11:22:00 AM
Purloined treasure written on the heart! A nice, didactic object lesson. Until we have learned to swim against the tide, we cannot fully appreciate the blessings that we have accumulated. Enjoyed your trip down memory lane.
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Date: 7/9/2011 11:21:00 AM
Purloined treasure written on the heart! A nice, didactic object lesson. Until we have learned to swim against the tide, we cannot fully appreciate the blessings that we have accumulated. Enjoyed your trip down memory lane.
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:08:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your outstanding poetry this morning Dr. Ram. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. I did try to write for your contest and hope it is what you were asking for. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/7/2011 10:16:00 PM
Adventure is the spice of life i am told, Dr Ram.! Glad you didn't get peppered and and are telling young tales from your day's of old..
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Date: 7/7/2011 5:52:00 PM
Very creative work..Especially like the way that you presented the last two lines..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 7/7/2011 5:02:00 PM
a super caper Dr. Ram... a lesson learned .. a brave and bold adventure..luv..
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Date: 7/7/2011 4:44:00 PM
Enjoyed reading today....I have seen movies on pearl harbor and can't really imagine how life can change over night in a split second.
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