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MEMORIES ON BRANCHES

Olive Eloisa Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled MEMORIES ON BRANCHES which was written by poet Olive Eloisa Guillermo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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MEMORIES ON BRANCHES

            

              Scrumptious sight of prairies and grass
       Ardent beaming of flower buds and buzzing bees
         Leafless coils, branches of trees become alive
          Hastening! Arousing everyone's joy and vive
             Everyone happy on cheerful springtime!

             A cotillion trips and chirps of jolly birds
         From some distance, I have started to heard
         Fantastic shun and kisses of pretty butterflies
       Tempting all species of flora and fauna to thrive
        Welcoming, beckoning the heat of summertime!

         First crisp of breeze, creating dew in morning
Canopy of red and orange leaves from branches, enchanting!
      Turning the world into a canvass of nature's brush
  Unnoticeable, such romantic dash making anyone blush
  Revel, embrace the sweet amorous season of autumn!

                 Solid chilling raindrops of snowflakes
                Giving warning: careful during breaks
            Covering branches, bringing icy cold aches
                Yet, skiing an exhilarating cool escape
             Delight in the coolness ambiance of winter!

                                         BY
                                    olive_eloi
                                     2:22 pm
                                   02/26/2014

CONTEST: MEMORIES ON BRANCHES
SPONSOR: GAIL ANGEL DOYLE
4TH PLACE

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  1. Date: 12/4/2014 2:13:00 PM
    I love this poem Olive. It makes me want to jump into your poem and live them. You sure have talent, you sure have style. Poetry's in you, and it makes me smile. Most definitely a favourite for me, James :) :)

  1. Date: 4/10/2014 5:39:00 PM
    Wow.. Great poem and win Olive!

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 4/11/2014 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Dave for passing by.. :) God bless as always.. :)
  1. Date: 4/7/2014 3:27:00 PM
    Good for you Olive_eloi !!:) congrats on your fine placing. Unfortunately I had missed this poem before, but now I realize what a beautiful write you managed to create; apart from the ideas also personification and strong imagery. I give you high rating :) a girl for all seasons :) // paul

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 4/7/2014 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Paul.. :) i wasn't at all expecting though as I myself didn't experience this in real.. :) i only see it on movies... :D and imagine it.. :) +olive_eloi with a wave
  1. Date: 4/7/2014 2:20:00 PM
    Strong verses here, Olive, you convey much to appreciate about tree branches. Congratulations on your win!

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 4/7/2014 2:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for passing by :) appreciate it.. :) though in Philippines we don't have really that four seasons.. :)
  1. Date: 4/7/2014 7:54:00 AM
    Real snowflakes I cud feel Olive !! Great poem n win ! Congrats !!

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 4/7/2014 2:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU FOR DROPPING BY :) to God the greatest glory :)
  1. Date: 3/2/2014 5:04:00 AM
    Sensational poem . Going to be keeping my eye on you . You are more than a bit special.

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/2/2014 5:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) thanks for a drop by darren... :D God bless us all.. :) what your favorite season?