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Was walking down memory lane, Was walking on the beach, Throttling the feelings of pain, Keeping doubts out of reach. Had a look at the sands of time The hours when time itself stood still, Could hear distant bells chime, And I was walking while I still stood still. Felt the heat of the sun beating, Could sense an awe that the past left, Saw the sheath of life fleeting, Glimpses of what was there were best.

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Date: 5/8/2009 8:59:00 PM
sweet momeries collapsing triumphantly, majestically, perfectly, and like your poem marvelously......done, it was a joy to read, lots of fun. :)
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Date: 4/19/2009 6:40:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem. It has good rhyme. I especially like the line "...Throttling the feelings of pain," Oh, how we keep the hut going when we do that. What an excellent way to say it. Keep writing. God Bless you and welcome to Poetry soup. Love, Dane
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Date: 4/14/2009 7:52:00 AM
Impressive.
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