Melody Maker

Beat of thunders drum lightning dances across the sky melody maker.

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Robert Pettit

Date: 2/12/2011 8:33:00 AM

If a stormy sky makes a melody, then that melody may sound like the William Tell Overture by Rossini. Your haiku is quite descriptive. I have just sent you soup mail.

Elaine George

Date: 1/18/2011 6:19:00 PM

This is a fantastic Haiku, Phyllis, Lainie

Date: 12/27/2010 3:12:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Keep on writing my friend. Happy New Year! Karen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2010 8:21:00 AM

Excelent Phyllis, have yourself a wonderful x-mass and the best new year God bless,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/21/2010 8:47:00 AM

thankxxx Phyllis for your most elegant comments and appreciate the fav too.. I felt so moved with this theme and poetry is such a part of all of us so felt it appropriate to concentrate on poetry full force for this contest.. glad u enjoyed and happy holidays my friend from both of us..to u and yours..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2010 9:33:00 PM

NOw as I reread this one, it makes more sense after having seen your tribute for Charles! It is reallynice. LUv, Andrea

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 12/15/2010 7:47:00 AM

Deep and thought provoking poem penned here, just for my honor, i appreciate this dedication from the debt of my heart. love, melody maker.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2010 7:07:00 AM

A different kind of melody, and one that stands out, Phyllis. VERY nice haiku. Well, I am done with the buying part of Xmas. NO more for me. Joe is unemployed as of today. Things are really tight. Pray for us he finds a good trucking job at last instead of more scumbags. LUv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/12/2010 9:02:00 AM

the sound of thunder is musical!! well-scribed, phyllis... just awesome! warmest, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/12/2010 8:56:00 AM

Nice imagery you have penned for the melody maker, Phyllis