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Melancholic Life

The road I walked is mend With emptiness and loniness Fake words, fake friend Everything turns to nothingness High in the sky with hope Pulled down to earth by reality Hanging on a tight rope Lies,are words of equality Sirens sings songs of rave Illusions, they appear coy Wooing me closer to the grave I am just a foolish boy Looking for angels in this life But demons only i find None to protect and keep me safe At times I wish i was blind Speak with their fiery breadth Light just seem to vanish As i fall unto their wrath Am i about to perish? Broken but not beaten I steadfast Learning and living i kept on For i know this life is vast Untill the end I shall endure on

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Skat A

Date: 11/29/2014 10:59:00 PM

Isaac, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Isaac C Lalduhawma
Date: 12/2/2014 6:20:00 AM

Thank you so much SKAT will defanately drop by and i really hope we can become really good friends Hugs, Isaac

Cona Adams

Date: 11/19/2014 9:00:00 AM

Welcome to poetry soup. You will find true friends here, and enjoy positive feedback on your work. Thanks for sharing your heartfelt words.

Isaac C Lalduhawma
Date: 11/20/2014 4:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Cona. It really feels great being here, Isaac

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 11/18/2014 10:18:00 PM

It is not easy to share and become vulnerable by putting forth your emotions. This is a great way to do it. You will find this site has many people ready if you want assistance. Welcome, Isaac! Victoria

Isaac C Lalduhawma
Date: 11/18/2014 10:23:00 PM

Thank you so much Victoria. I know i have a long way to go so please don't hesitate to point out mistakes and errors i have made. Isaac

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/17/2014 8:28:00 PM

Welcome to poetrysoup Isaac. Wonderful to have you hear, and a great first poem. I enjoyed the flow to it, you did have a few spelling and punctuation errors, but no biggie, your words rolled right well after each other. I am looking forward to reading more of your writes.

Isaac C Lalduhawma
Date: 11/17/2014 8:35:00 PM

Thank you very much. And i will try to improve my punctuation and spellings. Please bear with me as i am still learning

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2014 12:07:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Isaac - I choose your first deep and well written poem - Great rhyme - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Isaac C Lalduhawma
Date: 11/17/2014 8:06:00 PM

Thank you very much Annie. This is one of the first poems i have written and i was really nervous about posting it here. And im really happy that people are really actually reading it and commenting it :). And i will do comment and read others poem