Megan

12.30.15 The storm rolled outside my window. Shook my bed frame. Lit up the walls-- Sent electricity through my brain. Surrounding me with night's mystery. I sought comfort. Raced the lightning down the hall-- To find safety in her arms.

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Skat A

Date: 7/10/2016 11:04:00 PM

NICE TO SEE AGAIN, KATE, I LIKE THIS POEM ABOUT MEGAN. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2016 10:00:00 PM

KATE, Congratulations on your awesome sibling win. XOX - LINDA -

Skat A

Date: 1/18/2016 8:37:00 AM

Kate, Congratulations on your lovely win. Love the subject..... SKAT **

Jan Allison

Date: 1/15/2016 5:39:00 PM

a lovely tribute:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 1/15/2016 4:48:00 PM

Katie, congratulations on your placement on my “When Older Siblings or Younger Step In”... contest. A wonderful tribute to your sister especially when you can run to her to feel safe. Hugs Eve

Skat A

Date: 12/31/2015 2:27:00 AM

Hi Kate, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/31/2015 1:20:00 AM

Kate, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@