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Medley of Questionkus

I fall backwards grasping at the air will anyone catch me jumping forward into empty pool why didn't I look first I am foolish learning the hard way will it make me wiser floating through life somewhat unaware is my ignorance bliss she smiles at me my heart skips a beat do we want the same thing fantasy girl woman of my dreams is she within my reach moving too fast removing my clothes do I want her to stop let me ponder the things I have done can I forgive myself yesterday was today is what is what will tomorrow be

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Verlena S. Walker

Date: 5/7/2014 1:25:00 PM

This is a favorite Rick... I like your Questionku with its reality... Verlena

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/7/2014 2:27:00 PM

I will do that soon Rick... Verlena

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/7/2014 1:38:00 PM

Thanks again Verlena, perhaps you will honour me by giving my form a try. I think you would do very well. Four syllables first line, five second and six on the third. The last line must be a question.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/6/2014 6:04:00 AM

I love the questions. Many of these I have asked myself repeatedly over the years.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2014 7:47:00 AM

Thanks again Monterey.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/5/2014 9:05:00 PM

Hello my friend enjoyed, a nicely done write, thank you also for your great comment on my swan believe it or not i did it in an a hour, it just flowed I love it when that happens don't you. thanks again for sharing your cool work and for reading mine take care cheri

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2014 7:48:00 AM

It was my pleasure, no thanks required.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 5/5/2014 7:31:00 AM

You've got your own form??!! Bloody hell mate, well done. Nice ending, I suppose the answer lies within. Delightful read.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/5/2014 8:57:00 AM

Thanks Scott, I was pleased when it was accepted.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/4/2014 12:16:00 PM

Your own form! What a delight to have your form acknowledged! Your questions are so deep. Some seem to be taken from my own heart! That last one is a grand finale, Richard. Lovely...as always!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2014 7:10:00 PM

It's the answer to why the vase is broken. I pointed out the guilty party without saying he did it. On my way to your Blog.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/4/2014 3:37:00 PM

OH!! And I have a new blog up! If you have a few minutes! ;)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/4/2014 3:36:00 PM

Don't think me simple, but I didn't get that metaphor so well! Will you explain?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2014 3:31:00 PM

My favorite for some reason is the slingshot one. So nice to have you comment Eileen. A big hug!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2014 11:34:00 PM

verrry interesting when I got to the slingshot part!! Clever suite of questionku, my friend. What inspired this?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2014 8:45:00 AM

I havn't written one in a while so I thought I should not neglect my own form.