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After a hard day, I relaxed in the shower.
I bent over and let the warm water run.
As it began to penetrate my body I turned
it to very hot. The pleasure rose immensely.

After a very trying experience I needed time.
A HARD thing, to squeeze in sometimes.

The DAY to day, mundane, obscenity
we call work. Five days and a handshake
from which I have to wipe the drool as
soon as I can before RELAXING a bit,
IN THE SHOWER.

The immense pleasure of almost
scalding hot water, started me thinking
of how lucky and blessed I really am.
It’s good to reflect on such things, to keep
from getting all BENT out of shape.

To dwell OVER things without reminding
oneself that this was the way it really was
is a good way to end up in a mental state.
If we think about the good things AND LET
THE WARM feelings run through us like
soaking in a nice hot furo with the steam
rising through the WATER on a cool night, we
begin to get the picture.

It is very hot. The pleasure rises.
As I RUN the memories through my
mind and AS the many things I have shared
in life BEGAN TO PENETRATE the corners of
all capacity to maintain composure,
tears welled readily as MY BODY began
to react to the memories.

Quickly I TURNED a simple process into
a healing meditation. IT proved to be
something I do often when I
feel the need TO take a VERY HOT bath.

It is amazing how THE PLEASURE of one’s
own company often is beneficial, and should
not be taken lightly. I ROSE to a higher plane
of understanding of my inner self s that day,
and am now IMMENSELY more comfortable
just being me.

Mar 5 2012 Charles Henderson
for Debbie Guzzi’s Et Cetera Contest

After a hard day, I relaxed in the shower. I bent over and let the warm water run. As it began to penetrate my body I turned it to very hot. The pleasure rose immensely. AFTER a very trying experience I needed time. A HARD thing, to squeeze in sometimes. The DAY to day, mundane, obscenity we call work. Five days and a handshake from which I have to wipe the drool as soon as I can before RELAXING a bit, IN THE SHOWER. The immense pleasure of almost scalding hot water, started me thinking of how lucky and blessed I really am. It’s good to reflect on such things, to keep from getting all BENT out of shape. To dwell OVER things without reminding oneself that this was the way it really was is a good way to end up in a mental state. If we think about the good things AND LET THE WARM feelings run through us like soaking in a nice hot furo with the steam rising through the WATER on a cool night, we begin to get the picture. It is very hot. The pleasure rises. As I RUN the memories through my mind and AS the many things I have shared in life BEGAN TO PENETRATE the corners of all capacity to maintain composure, tears welled readily as MY BODY began to react to the memories. Quickly I TURNED a simple process into a healing meditation. IT proved to be something I do often when I feel the need TO take a VERY HOT bath. It is amazing how THE PLEASURE of one’s own company often is beneficial, and should not be taken lightly. I ROSE to a higher plane of understanding of my inner self that day, and am now IMMENSELY more comfortable just being me. Mar 5 2012 Charles Henderson for Debbie Guzzi’s Et Cetera Contest

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Date: 4/15/2012 12:31:00 AM
They say that we spend time in our own company more than anyone elses so it is a wonder we don't know ourselves better than we do. A very deep, real and well written poem.
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Date: 3/21/2012 3:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Charles! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/19/2012 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Et cetera" contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/18/2012 6:49:00 PM
Hope all is weell with you and Carolyn and that you are not working yourself ttoo hard!!!Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/18/2012 12:49:00 PM
CHARLES, nice verse for Debbie's, contest.. Congratulations~always*PD
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Date: 3/17/2012 8:08:00 PM
Very cleverly done Charles. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/17/2012 4:51:00 PM
haha, I liked how you highlighted those words so she'd see you got them in. You really took the contest to heart, Charles. I am feeling bad now for not trying it. BIG congrats on your win!!
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Date: 3/5/2012 9:19:00 AM
You did a wonderful job for Debbie's contest. I enjoyed reading your poem, Charles, and I think Debbie's going to like it a lot. Best wishes in the contest! Love, KIm
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:50:00 AM
I like the last line. chuckled andgritted my teeth a bit because I've done that same shower too hotthing before...excelllently written, with a montage of meanings here, enjoyed the morning read Sir, Sincerely, Cindy Lu
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