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Medicinal Melody

The heart skips, losing once to many more then she adored holding fast to who she loves a supple and a gurgle she does make falling away by the side, she walks away as the morning breaks healing dreams she once believed never being a flawless being her dying scream she doth make a care she has no more to come dreams so far away.... Walking in her head, that never was one soul was born-darkened wish.. society souls, how dark the dish the wicked game, refocused dreams is there one, that is not stained? a safe dream, finding them the shadow to all concerns a players Kiss to much loss and so it begins and begins with the blue dream of mine.. TILL the end of time.... Brooke

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Date: 5/13/2014 9:36:00 PM
Brooke... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/13/2014 11:03:00 PM
THANK you Linda.. so good to see you
Date: 5/13/2014 10:29:00 AM
Liked how the words come together... enjoyed it!
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/13/2014 4:27:00 PM
Thankyou Lily.. nice to meet you
Date: 5/13/2014 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Brooke
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/13/2014 9:51:00 AM
thank you Dr,. Ram
Date: 5/6/2014 11:48:00 PM
The way it flows really reminds me of the poems written back in the day when poets were flourishing and highly recognized in the society? Has anyone ever told you that you're an old soul that exists in the now? :)
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/6/2014 11:57:00 PM
wow Jake.. no .. I have to say no one ever told me that.. but i do love the classics ... the best poets and poetry ever.. many blessings to you hugs Brooke
Date: 5/6/2014 7:20:00 PM
Hi Brooke, WOW I agree with Sam. This was exceptional and an applause is in order.:~) Nicely written here Brooke. Thanks for sharing this beauty with us. Peace, Deborah
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/6/2014 11:55:00 PM
Thank you deborah.. hugs
Date: 5/6/2014 9:37:00 AM
Wow, Brooke! I can't believe you put this intricate poem together in just a few hours! I takes me days to put my poems together. You are indeed talented! Never lose your "blue dreams", dear Brooke. I know you have the inner strength to hang onto them. Luv & Hugs;) Ben
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/6/2014 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Ben ... you are too kind...many blessings to you my friend lots of luv and hugs

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