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Me Versus 4th Grader - Part 2

Bed Time Story Day already low --------------------------> Hazelle Standing owl coo, coo in time ---------> Me Waiting for a tale-------------------------> Hendrickson Sun Huge ball of fire ---------------------------> Hendrickson It gives us light, heat and warmth ----> Hazelle The window of bliss ----------------------> Me Author's Note: This is another haiku which I and my twins students made, they were really excited when doing these haikus :)

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Date: 2/6/2013 2:28:00 PM
Hello Yanny, the haiku pairing sounds like fun... Love this... xox~PD
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/6/2013 4:37:00 PM
Hello Linda, thank you for your visit, and glad that you like it :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/13/2013 2:21:00 AM
Wonderful that you are passing you love of words and ideas to your young students.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/13/2013 4:00:00 AM
Thank you Richard :) I the one who should thanked you for making such an inspiring poem, and its really an honor for me :D, wishing you a warm sunshine :D
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2013 2:22:00 AM
Have a wonderful day Yanny, thanks again for the terzanelle.

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