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Me and My Razor

when i slide the razor down my wrist i start to feeland see a red mist. when i put the razor down and look at myself bleed i suddenly start realize that i cannot see. whenever it gashes open i see all the blood it was a puddle and suddenly became a flood. i love seeing the blood run straight down my arm people always told me cutting wouldn't be any harm. whenver people see me they call me an emo kid. if they only knew, everything that i've did.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/14/2009 8:17:00 AM
The poem ryhmes, but it's strange if you truly razor your wrist!! May I suggest that you consult Kyra's TV show at once? Please read more poetry of the past centry to nourish your live stanzas beautifully. Wishing you all the best.
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Date: 4/30/2009 7:00:00 AM
what ever causes this self destructive behavior is "wicked" what's an emo kid? emotional? BIG HUGS Light & Love
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Date: 1/23/2009 8:29:00 AM
wow raw--filled with emotions and disturbing thoughts chilly write-- again wow
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