Me

I am built from words once i have been told I am a precious secret waiting to be unfold I am a mother a daughter a sister a friend I fight for my inner peace on my self i depend Unwrap my emotions from this shape i am trapped in You would be surprised how much love i could reveal Conquer my sorrows lead them to light Show me the lands of sparkling delights One day i might break down in front of your eyes Don't step back don't be surprised For I am a woman with no disguise

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Skat A

Date: 2/19/2015 6:37:00 PM

Mona:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/4/2015 7:54:00 PM

Truth and innocence lay silently within such words as these, waiting to be released by the magic of a poet's dream. Emile.

Mona Karaki
Date: 2/9/2015 11:26:00 AM

Emile that was a poem now!! I love it

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/3/2015 4:19:00 AM

- I want to welcome you to P- Soup, Mona - The friendly words that written today can bear fruit tomorrow - Looking forward to read more poems from you in the future :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Mona Karaki
Date: 2/9/2015 11:27:00 AM

Hi i enjoy reading your poems as well some similarity to my type of writing.

Mona Karaki

Date: 2/2/2015 6:18:00 AM

SKAT A and LINDA i feel overwhelmed by these warm welcoming of you i sure will be reading your poems with delight. I am sure i will have a lots of fun to inspire and be inspired here thank you a lot both of you. You sure are on my friend list from now on Kisses and hugs from the middle east lebanon

Skat A

Date: 2/1/2015 1:10:00 PM

Hi Mona, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/1/2015 10:31:00 AM

Mona,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) As I hope one day you will follow and give me a few poetry pointers. We're Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with your New Poet Friend! @-> LINDA <-@