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Me, In Mom's Garden

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I will turn back the old pages of time, to mom's flowers and this little girl; mom filled my pool and in I jumped, she called me pixie and I giggled. Then she turned to her garden, trimming black-eyed susan; and white shasta daisies, and we helped too. I had my own tools, I worked hard too; she gave me a small patch in the sunshine, with bright petunias and yellow marigolds. Mom planted coneflowers for the monarchs, I planted columbine for the hummingbirds; and yarrow for bees, oh, I loved the garden. And I loved mom too, and the lilies, blue bell flowers, and violets; oh, that crazy creeping thyme, this is a treasured page in the book of my life. _________________________ June 20, 2016 Verse Submitted to the contest, New/Old 2 sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

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Date: 7/31/2016 9:12:00 AM
- A great and lovely choice of your poems B.W., congratulations ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/31/2016 7:21:00 AM
What a lovely memory to go back to, Constance...fresh, full of simplicity and innocence! Congratulations on placing first!! Regards // paul
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Date: 7/30/2016 11:31:00 PM
This is beautiful! Congratulations on your first place win Constance. Delightful! 7 : )
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Date: 7/30/2016 7:26:00 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your First Place win in Eve's the New/Old 2 contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/30/2016 2:47:00 PM
Congratulations on you win, Broken Wings ! Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/30/2016 2:30:00 PM
Delightfully descriptive, B. W. I remember a great number of monarchs (and other species) when I was a kid. Don't see them in abundance anymore. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/25/2016 9:52:00 AM
A very descriptive image filled write that is written with a gentle playfulness and tenderness. Well done BW.
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Date: 6/22/2016 11:24:00 AM
Broken Wings, wonderful imagery lady, good luck in the contest, this is wonderful :)-luloo
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Date: 6/22/2016 8:50:00 AM
A sweet poem for this contest theme... such great memories you've described. Very nice, Constance.
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Date: 6/22/2016 2:56:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 6/21/2016 10:26:00 PM
Lovely! And very sweet.
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Date: 6/21/2016 10:18:00 PM
You created an extraordinary scene from your memory. I enjoyed the simple descriptive tone and you worked in the imaginary elements to fit with what was real. Nicely written - Jesse
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Date: 6/21/2016 10:37:00 AM
Sounds like great memories.... Great poem, too.
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Date: 6/21/2016 5:54:00 AM
This is well done, Constance:) All the best:)
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Date: 6/20/2016 9:59:00 PM
This is beautiful... Gud luck with the contest....
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