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My Big Dreams sleep on the wings of saints. They become vaporous and airborne colliding with baptismal raindrops balancing themselves on a million patterned snowflakes to only then slip, slither and snuggle into the bosoms of future white rosebuds. Burning dreams glitter in cahoots with Polaris creating a brouhaha loud enough to wake the dead. Their dressing rooms may be seen in the tunnels of L. Frank Baum's ebon cyclones or possibly meandering between the fragmented lines of a Lewis Carroll novel. Carefree and capricious I see them listening to the silence near twilight; secretly conversing with rainbows at dawn. Those precocious pixies seeing me laugh aloud during unexpected sun showers; as I gleefully observe a smattering of umbrella-less fools being gloriously splashed and plunked by My Big Dreams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/19/2010 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations John on your well deserved win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fast and Fabulous". Hope you are having great success with your endeavors my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 8:09:00 PM
Awesome imagery, of course!! Congratulations, JOhn!
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Date: 7/18/2010 9:35:00 AM
Poetry at it's best John. An excellent piece for up and coming poets to read and take inspiration from. Many congratulations on your win in Catie's fine contest >> James
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Date: 7/18/2010 9:10:00 AM
Wonderful piece John..congrats to you..good to see your posts again. BG
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Date: 4/5/2009 12:37:00 PM
Hey John. Congrats on your win in Christie's contest! Your poetry always way beyond excellent. Warmest wishes. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/4/2009 11:34:00 PM
John - Congratulations on placing in Christies contest – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/4/2009 8:53:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Christie's contest John.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/4/2009 12:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your fantastic poem and well deserved win in Christie's excellent contest.
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:13:00 AM
Nice flow of thoughts and aspirations, John! I enjoy those moments when the brain functions like a tap on full blast. Congratulations on the win on the Fab Fantasy contest! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 4/3/2009 9:34:00 AM
Hi John... congrats on your win.. a beautiful poem my friend...
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:32:00 AM
Dear John,Congratulations on YOUR Win in the Fabulous Fantasy Contest by Cristie Moses A Very well deserved WIN ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 4/3/2009 6:43:00 AM
Your dreams come true every time you set pen to paper, John! Congratulations on another excellent winning poem!!! ~love, Carrie
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Date: 4/3/2009 6:05:00 AM
Wonderful write friend. This is clearly deserving of a win in Christie's contest. Congratulations! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 10/18/2008 7:31:00 PM
WOW!!!! I see why this was the BIG winner! Excellent work my friend. Thanks so much for even taking the time to read my poem 'Suffocating Dreams'. I hope to one day dream big like you! ~Monique
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Date: 10/15/2008 11:43:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Crystal's contest Kristin.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/15/2008 3:26:00 PM
Yippee yahoo and congrats dear John on your First Place win in Crystal's contest!!! Every and any poem you write is number 1!!! Love, Shar xoxo
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Date: 8/1/2008 10:57:00 AM
this was a heart warming piece of poetry, well wrote and told.
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Date: 7/24/2008 3:49:00 PM
This is visually very breathtaking and as usual so very well written. Good one John. Love Heidie
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Date: 7/24/2008 3:47:00 AM
P.S- thank you from my son Michael, he has big dreams, and I mean for him to realize them all. Every word of this is a mother's love...Thank you. XOXO
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Date: 7/24/2008 3:44:00 AM
Oh my dear, sweet Mr. Heck, you have this girl crying like a baby. Somehow, you have gently, but firmly touched my mind to the place from which I pray, and written my thoughts of prayer. How did you do that? When I take my negative thoughts and discard them, I turn them into stardust and throw them into the heavens like your raindrops, snowfalkes and eventually, rosebuds. This is a gift beyond words, and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kindness and talent - this means so much, K
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