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Sometimes I wonder if all the misleads, really led to something. if all the bad fights and screaming actually try to say something, if all the I love you's actually MEANT something. because at this point you just can't stop lying. regardless of how many times I say I wanna grow with you. See maybe because a man will never understand a woman. Maybe a man will never feel what a woman feels or maybe just maybe you never really came to feel "love" for me . Maybe I came in too fast , try to get my seatbelt on but you were going to roads, we didn't plan. you took u-turns back to back. Took a "shortcut" back to back. Took my heart for granted, but I cant let you do that.

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Date: 11/12/2016 7:25:00 AM
Ana J,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/11/2016 1:56:00 PM
This was really nice, sad but nicely expressed emotions and feelings.
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Date: 11/28/2016 6:34:00 AM
Thankyou, appreciate it!!

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