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Many Ways To Eye-Win

I know those eyes that look in many ways Giving me different shades and faces The eyes of my mom, drippings of grace I know those eyes that look in many ways The eyes of dad, strict and soft always A turned blind eye or casted down eyes I know those eyes that look in many ways Giving me different shades and faces. I know those eyes that look in many ways Giving me different shades and faces. Oh, the eyes of my neighbors debased I know those eyes that look in many ways Green with jealousy those evil eyes Looking from the corners of the eyes I know those eyes that look in many ways. Giving me different shades and faces I know those eyes that look in many ways Giving me different shades and faces Eyes like two burnt holes in *all-embrace I know those eyes that look in many ways And eyes on the back of head to spy Those Bed-room eyes, those feasting eyes I know those eyes that look in many ways Giving me different shades and faces. +++++++ July 27, 2016 Form : Triolet Dr. Ram Mehta Third Place Win Contest:Both side now by Alfred **All-embracing = blanket**

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Date: 8/8/2014 8:58:00 AM
Hi Dr.Ram: A beautiful poem! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/4/2014 8:00:00 PM
You are amazing! Grats on your win, you are a true poet and artist of words. :)
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Date: 8/4/2014 8:32:00 AM
A deep and moving piece Dr.Ram. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/3/2014 7:28:00 AM
congratulations on your win Dr Mehta:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/3/2014 7:16:00 AM
Nice Win,...pd
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Date: 8/2/2014 8:58:00 PM
Dr. Ram, I can see you put a lot of thought into this one. It's a powerful poem. I'm not sure if you are doing triolet rhyme scheme. but as a rhyming poem, it was a great read! Congratulations.
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Date: 8/2/2014 3:39:00 PM
Triolet format is not an easy task, but you made this beautiful, and also made it look smooth and easy. Well done, Dr. Ram!
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Date: 8/2/2014 2:33:00 PM
This is an excellent delivery in triple triolet form Dr! Eyes say it all...and you made great use of that fact! Congrats on a deserved win! // paul
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Date: 8/2/2014 11:44:00 AM
Great work, Dr. Ram, beautiful powerful imagery. This is a poetic gem that deserves the wonderful win! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/2/2014 11:42:00 AM
The eyes have it my friend...congrats
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Date: 8/2/2014 11:13:00 AM
And back again wid big congrats Dr Ram! Fabulous write!
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Date: 7/28/2014 1:20:00 AM
Many different eyes indeed here Dr Ram..' best wishes for this in the contest..!
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Date: 7/27/2014 10:47:00 AM
Unique take on theme Dr Ram,, good luck to u !
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