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Many Brides

Many Brides The mind remembers many brides, Of love an hurt an suicide, Of how I went away and died, In battle for the empire. A hundred ladies took her place, Not all were beautiful of face, Loyalty counted at that place, Axe murdered, then I died. To hold the gaze of perfect Gwen, Denied her hand, we’d meet again Be caught an banished, but still then, She was another’s bride. Another death, another time, Sweetest beauty, red, red wine, Atlantis, such a lovely clime, Tar pit I got fried. The cave of Og, when thunder clapped, Slapped down her father, whack, Caught her up, when I got slapped, Bit me jugular, death it got to ride. Gwen returned another time, Free woman, estacy divine, Infatuation was my crime, Yet death was very snide, Yet again I died. To never quite hold a tune, Encapsulate a dull buffoon, To never quite make the maidens swoon, Ironic the frustration… Don Johnson

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Date: 6/3/2012 2:46:00 AM
Encapsulate a dull buffoon, To never quite make the maidens swoon, Ironic the frustration… Great lines to conclude a real interesting ode of love and war ...
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Date: 1/17/2012 3:34:00 AM
Yes, a very interesting write Don , but may take a couple of reads! I'm sure you still make many a lsy swoon young Don! Hugs only Lizzie
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Lizzie Treetop
Date: 1/17/2012 3:34:00 AM
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:00:00 PM
An interesting write. I wonder who Gwen is?
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Don Johnson
Date: 1/16/2012 11:22:00 PM
I can't claim our Gwen, cos i'm way south in Australia, perhaps she will come again, to cause me complete heart failure, depends?
Date: 1/16/2012 3:47:00 PM
Hmm you get on a good roll there [above in this verse] and then as you say you can't just let the deep emotions be you have to feel ackward and bring out the clown? Well, Don it is a PART of your charm BUT not the only part..you should have let this be a serious write [LOL I had plenty farm smells too hon Auntie owned a chicken farm way worse smell than horse manure [the were always BOOKS and when I found the library well..the world is in books!]Light & Love
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Don Johnson
Date: 1/16/2012 4:33:00 PM
I know just because half the world will choose to reincarnate, the Christians won't even be resurrected, which they expect to be .... isn't this REINCARNATION TOO??? How many Jewish Prophets returned ? Wasn't John the Baptist Ellijah, returned.
Date: 1/16/2012 9:07:00 AM
i love this tender part of you as well, done.. a feast for the senses and so warmly imparted... impressed! :) huggs!
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Date: 1/15/2012 8:41:00 PM
Nicely done, and was this one inspired by our divine Gwen here? have a wonderful Monday. Luv, Andrea
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Don Johnson
Date: 1/15/2012 10:55:00 PM
If she was Gwen another time, if we should meet twould be a crime, oof passion...then.
Date: 1/15/2012 7:35:00 PM
bad luck through the ages, nice rhyme Don
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Date: 1/15/2012 5:55:00 PM
all the classics rolled into one, lovin' like a thief on the run. All those loves erratic and deaths so emphatic! just lovin yer poem Don, bye bye I'm gone! :)
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