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Manpower

The most eco-friendly vehicle one could meet Is a part of you..yes it's your own two feet... Essentially this transportation is almost free And quiet, as quiet as just two feet can be... Now of upkeep you must think a bit Healthy eating and good shoes that fit.. There are many miles on those feet of yours Sorry, can't take you on cross country tours... You'll see things that you won't from a car Birds and flowers, maybe an evening star... For around town your feet just cant be beat Leaving no carbon footprint..isn't that neat?!

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 6/1/2011 7:00:00 AM

My Dearest Most Only BELOVED BARBARA, I think I see a WINNER Magnificent, see YOU in the Winner's Circle LOVE YOU...HG

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/1/2011 3:34:00 AM

a very cute poem for the most basic of eco-friendly vehicles that we continually forget to be thankful for and use to it's full poetential. ( well, I don't forget really- just neglect the proper care and maintenance ... warranty ran out along time ago )... enjoyed your poem and good luck in the contest Barbara

Skat A

Date: 6/1/2011 12:42:00 AM

really great couplet barbara i love the message we can all do our own part Luv*Skat

Gene Williamson

Date: 5/31/2011 9:01:00 PM

Good message, Barbara, in rhyme yet. Me and my cane love to walk, especially on the beach where I can commune with the gulls and admire the lovely sights. Thanks for your generous comment on my recent post, Night's Edge. gene williamson

James Foulk

Date: 5/31/2011 4:47:00 PM

much healthier and no oil changes, or car repairs, a great ideal for a poem. enjoyed reading it.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/31/2011 4:43:00 PM

so true! How much healthier we all were in the old days! Light & Love [thanks for your nice comments]