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Manifold Blessings

Shadows stretch, and hungrily they gobble up the cold and homeless, Joe and Mary shiver, searching street fronts for some sign of meekness. Mary's pregnant, Joe is jobless, faith and hope belie their plight, all is dark, but wait, a flicker penetrates the inky night. Ken and Ted's auto repair shop, first to greet the business day, a welcome in with smiles and hugs, our supplicants have found a way, a refuge from the icy blackness, blankets and a warming brew revitalizes souls in torment, homemade biscuits, homemade stew. Daylight breaks, it's Christmas morning, Ken and Ted know time won't cease for squeaky fan belts, faulty starters, broken soul mates seeking peace. German shepherds watch in awe as Mary's baby cries and sputters, workers give what they can muster, "Praise the Lord!" the 'midwife' utters. A lowly place, a sacred mission celebrated there this day, Joe and Mary ever thankful, all God's Children kneel and pray.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/9/2016 8:35:00 PM
a clever retelling of the christmas story, keith. i like the way you've brought it up to date yet made it seem brand new at the same time...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/11/2016 3:54:00 PM
Kinda out of time, but the Christmas Season can be celebrated at any time of year I think... Blessings to you! Keith
Date: 5/9/2016 6:25:00 PM
Hi Keith! I'm happy I'd clicked on the 'who in online' tab.:) A modern day version of this touching event from long ago. You have captured its essence while creating an entirely different scenario. "a refuge from the icy blackness", I love the imagery with the feeling it emits. Keep well, love you, Mikki
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/9/2016 6:32:00 PM
Lovely to hear from you Mikki... thanks for your delightful review!! Much love, Keith

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