Mama

Mama, why am I so alone, I cant go outside, Im scared I might not make it home. Im alive, But Im sinking. Ive been here before and I deserve a little more . Why are they lying? When I think of heaven , I think of dying. Please help me ... Help me believe in me, I want to be someone who believes. Mama , cant you see?

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2014 5:04:00 PM

Brenda, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2014 3:09:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Brenda :) - I choose your first nice written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/6/2014 3:01:00 PM

A special write Brenda, I miss my mother... I wish she was here to hold me when I need her..., A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 3/6/2014 12:00:00 PM

Hello Brenda, I love my mama... Heartfelt..., Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT