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Mallory

Color Your World Contest: Mallory A royal velvet A lilac flower Colorful power Amethyst carat Favorite pallet She loves it more Deep meaningful Girl beautiful Streaked in her hair Artist wild Brush in hand Dip it in Across Canvas Whirl (Diminished Hexaverse) Copyright 2011 Autumn Ehrhardt

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/1/2012 11:30:00 PM

It is not easy to write a good diminished hexaverse poem, but it appears you have turned the trick here. Good write.

Margeret Bailey

Date: 10/27/2011 7:16:00 PM

Very creative write!

Margeret Bailey

Date: 10/12/2011 6:52:00 PM

Lovely!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/5/2011 12:54:00 PM

I really liked how you depict Mallory here relating her with a color and painting (lucky girl to have this poem for her) -- you've worked this form really well-- that last line gives this just the right touch of whimsy, :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2011 11:26:00 AM

I love these kinds of forms. Great final line for that whirl of most beautiful hue!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2011 11:33:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Autumn. I enjoyed reading it this lovely day. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/11/2011 10:05:00 AM

oh my... wonderful, autumn! soup mail! :) huggs, nette