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Male Red Cardinal

male red cardinal rules the feed trough by strong force... nuthatcher eats seed I was watching the birds at some food that I had placed out on a steroform plate.. A Male Red Cardinal would run all the birds away then this tiny little Nuthatcher would fly in and get one seed..The Cardinal seemed to keep watch while the Nuthatcher ate maybe five or six seeds..

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2014 12:19:00 PM

maybe you should use "steals" for "eats" since the red bird is allowing him to get in there and get one!!! While the others can't. It makes you wonder why this bird is allowed to get away with it!!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/10/2014 5:30:00 PM

I'm sorry your not feeling well it has to get better your in my thoughts dear take care of yourself ok, i'll say a stronger prayer for you ok, thank you for your comments get some rest tonight cheri

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/10/2014 4:20:00 PM

I liked tlhis one before remember i told ya how it made me lol but it has a truthful grace also, thank you for your comment on my work how are you feeling my friend better i hope. i am still saying prayers for ya lady. cheri

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/10/2014 10:00:00 AM

Beautiful evocation of nature here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/10/2014 9:05:00 AM

I enjoyed this Haiku, it made me think of throwing bread to pigeons when you have an agressive one that trys to scare of the weaker ones.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/10/2014 7:07:00 AM

a lovely explanation of this really super haiku one for faves Sara Shadow x smile hug

Syam Madappattu

Date: 1/10/2014 6:31:00 AM

It is graphic,but with great depth...I think at any rate no obstacles in its appreciation...love...Syam

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/9/2014 10:10:00 PM

You have described an excellent write of enchantment! This is an exceptional poem my friend! I surely loved reading this delightful piece! Your love for nature and birds are very evident within this write! What a fascinating poem, Great Work!!

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 1/9/2014 5:36:00 PM

Sara you share my same deep love of nature. Thanks for sharing this beauty.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/9/2014 5:31:00 PM

finely written 'ku on a cardinal.. so enchanting, sara... a most observant write!.. huggs

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/9/2014 3:53:00 PM

We see cardinals all year long here in Wisconsin. I think they are the most beautiful in the wintertime, when their red color contrasts with the white snow. A very nice haiku, Sara. Well done!...Thank you for the kind visit. I really do appreciate it!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/9/2014 1:59:00 PM

We don't have cardinals here in California..Id love to see one. Thanks for the pretty picture. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/9/2014 1:10:00 PM

- Beautiful picture of nature, Sara - enjoyable to see the animals life and rules. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Beam

Date: 1/9/2014 12:49:00 PM

Nice haiku, and it gave me an idea thanks for sharing