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Making Life Complete

I whispered my dreams into the heavenly realm Embracing the circle of life You became my shining star ***the reason I live for You make me strong when I am weak Making my life complete. 29/07/15

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Date: 8/7/2015 8:23:00 PM
When I read this, I think of God. He makes my life complete. And when I am weak, He is strong. He is all that you wrote about here. But I've been known to be wrong! Thanks for reading some of my poems, Phy, This poem is a 7. Hugs, Darlene
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Date: 8/7/2015 5:09:00 PM
wow,now here is one I missed. Very lovely, Phyllis. Who was it you were thinking of?
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Date: 8/6/2015 3:33:00 PM
Great mystery here Phyllis. Your heavenly friend must be heavenly situated, eh? Love, daver
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/8/2015 12:15:00 PM
Always heavenly situated. love phyl
Date: 7/29/2015 2:27:00 PM
- Satisfied with life, a wonderful feeling - A lovely poem, dear Phyllis! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/8/2015 12:15:00 PM
thanks for your comment on my poem Anne Lise

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