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Make a Wish

Make a wish then blow out the candle Something that you mind can't handle Something that you wish to achieve Keep the faith and just believe

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2014 6:32:00 AM

Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,

Diane Christian

Date: 5/27/2014 7:31:00 AM

congratulations on your featured poem wonderful, so swet

James Hyler

Date: 5/13/2014 11:05:00 AM

Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart

Skat A

Date: 12/26/2013 12:23:00 AM

Hi Elvrnia, , Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"

Joseph Sergi

Date: 12/20/2013 4:41:00 PM

Elvrnia a short poem with a powerful message. Let's always remember to "Keep the faith and just believe" nice write.

Weston Gregory

Date: 12/17/2013 10:40:00 AM

nostalgic fi real... your piece is nicely done keep it up

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/16/2013 3:15:00 PM

Elvrnia, love the passion from your pen.. , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/16/2013 2:23:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Elvrina ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)