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Magical Moonlit Garden

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Deep at the bottom of my garden I have witnessed an amazing sight Fairies, gnomes and pixies Having a party in the moonlight They are magical little creatures Dancing around sleeping flowers It’s a breathtaking sight if you see them I'm enchanted by their antics for hours But the second the sun begins to rise and sunshine rays break at dawn These little people just disappear Not a trace of them left on the lawn! Little People Contest sponsored by Shadow Hamilton 06~20~16

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Lewis Raynes

Date: 7/12/2016 6:28:00 PM

Beautiful little write Jan, :)

Louis Borgo

Date: 6/27/2016 4:58:00 PM

Nice title and great write, Louis.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/27/2016 9:28:00 AM

Very cute.... Look again you might find them....good luck

Skat A

Date: 6/24/2016 6:40:00 AM

Good luck Jan.... Skat

Jan Allison
Date: 6/25/2016 7:29:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 6/22/2016 6:23:00 PM

Lovely Jan. I wish we really could see them.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/25/2016 7:29:00 PM

Thanks jean -after a few glasses of Guinness and you probably will lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/21/2016 9:43:00 AM

Very cute, Jan, and you used the words so well! I am sure this will do very well in the contest! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2016 3:28:00 PM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Jesse Day

Date: 6/21/2016 8:38:00 AM

Making fantasy seem real - nicely written! - jesse

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2016 3:29:00 PM

Thanks Jesse:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/21/2016 2:13:00 AM

Fantastic and beautiful poem as the flowers are dear, Jan. Tonight I will stay up all night in my roof garden for to enjoy this sight. A seven and fav. Enjoyed it!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2016 3:30:00 PM

Oh I hope you share some magical moments on your roof garden:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/20/2016 8:48:00 PM

Reminds me of the little ones, beautiful poem!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/21/2016 1:10:00 AM

Thanks Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 6/20/2016 6:32:00 PM

Beautiful, Jan, wonderful flow. Good luck in the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 6/21/2016 1:10:00 AM

It still needs work Eve:-( hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/20/2016 5:45:00 PM

I have the squirrels, rabbits, and the occasional opossum eating up my garden at night....trade??

Jan Allison
Date: 6/21/2016 1:09:00 AM

LOL we only have rabbits here never seen one in my garden they live in the fields - opossum - sounds interesting - will swap for the slugs that decimate my plants lol lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/20/2016 2:25:00 PM

- A lovely poem with sweet magic in your garden, Jan :) - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/20/2016 3:04:00 PM

Thanks as ever my sunshine friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/20/2016 2:02:00 PM

Nice fantasy poem here. Ah. the dreams at nighttime! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 6/20/2016 3:04:00 PM

Thanks Matthew:-) hugs Jan xx