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Magical Castle

I slightly stagger and stare up at the delicately decorated castle looming… in the bed of roses scattered among the tall grass… Taking my hand gently he lightly tucks a fly away daisy behind my ear… Hand in hand we slowly stroll up the cobblestone pathway toward the herd of laughter and music bursting at the seams… My smile reaches my eyes as we immerse in the wondrous festivities… I am lost in feel of the music and enchantment…that I almost miss the change in the scenery as he twirls and pulls me toward the dark shadows of the stone wall… Where is the crystal clear lake that I peered… at our arrival?… The scene is eerie…there is an element of danger… coming closer in the wind… I look up into his piercing blue eyes and am cut short… His stare is of lust and desire and of determination… Moving my long golden locks softly away from my long neck… he bestows a magical kiss… exquisite in itself… His strong hands bring me closer… as I melt into his embrace… filled with love and contentment I stay still… captivated by him... For the contest: “On the first of May” 4-28-15 Meg Anderson

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Date: 5/16/2015 12:38:00 PM
I loved your poem . . . wondering if you are planning to add another chapter . . . I was just getting into it . . . I am captivated!! Missed ya!! Hope you are well and will post something soon! love and light. 7
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Meg Anderson
Date: 5/16/2015 3:59:00 PM
Awe David, lol I could have kept going but I like to leave the reader hanging a bit.. I will write more but you have to, too! Missed ya too!
Date: 5/15/2015 9:37:00 AM
Waiting for your poems. Where are they?
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Meg Anderson
Date: 5/15/2015 9:40:00 AM
Well Hannington, lol I am still pondering my next one... it takes time. I have to be inspired... that's when I words come flowing out. I will see what I can do. Thanks.
Date: 5/8/2015 2:36:00 PM
MEG, CONGRATS in Isaiah Zerbst's contest *SKAT*
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Meg Anderson
Date: 5/8/2015 3:05:00 PM
Awe thank you!
Date: 5/8/2015 2:35:00 PM
oh so romantic Meg so beautiful a poem - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Meg Anderson
Date: 5/8/2015 3:10:00 PM
Jan, thank you. This was fun for me and I loved writing it!
Date: 5/8/2015 2:27:00 PM
Meg. Congratulations on your first day of may win. Love LINDA
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Meg Anderson
Date: 5/8/2015 3:11:00 PM
Linda, thanks. I really had fun with this one.
Date: 5/7/2015 10:09:00 AM
You have exploited your creative faculties. You over-deserve a 7+!
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Meg Anderson
Date: 5/7/2015 10:59:00 AM
Awe thank you! I loved writing this piece. Thanks for the kind words.
Date: 5/2/2015 11:32:00 AM
Majestic and beautifully romantic!
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Meg Anderson
Date: 5/2/2015 8:47:00 PM
Arthur, thank you! I love to add a little romance to my poems! This was a little happiness mixed with s little fright then excitement. Meg
Date: 4/30/2015 3:27:00 PM
Meg, I enjoyed the entry. Good luck. SKAT
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Meg Anderson
Date: 4/30/2015 8:21:00 PM
To go. I had to fix my spelling. Lol
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Meg Anderson
Date: 4/30/2015 8:20:00 PM
Awe thank you Skat. This was a fun challenge yo ho back in time and imagine what it would be like in this time. I had fun writing it!

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