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In the most quiet night I think you lay by my side. Whispers the music in my ears. I sing to you sweet lullabies. The cool breeze passes my window. I cover my heart that is cold. I wish my eyes wake up tomorrow. With your lips kissing my nose.

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Date: 5/9/2017 4:49:00 PM
Very touching and heart warming
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Date: 5/9/2017 2:59:00 PM
This is beautiful. It was heartfelt. thank you.
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Date: 8/9/2016 11:24:00 PM
This is hauntingly beautiful. The vulnerability is so real and the last line is stunning. Exceptional writing! An absolute pleasure to read. blessings, lynn
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Date: 8/9/2016 4:49:00 PM
This is wonderful Aiyah
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Date: 8/1/2016 9:28:00 PM
So nice a drêam.
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Date: 7/25/2016 7:05:00 PM
Beautiful poem Aiyah and written on my birthday, hope you are well, take care my friend........Vera
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Date: 7/16/2016 3:25:00 PM
beautiful Aiyah I found the final stanza so sad it brought a lump to my throat:-( hugs Jan xx7
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 7/19/2016 3:52:00 PM
Thank you ,Jan :) just tried to put a li'l time to write again.. I missed everyone!! :)
Date: 7/14/2016 6:20:00 AM
Impressive. Keep poems like that coming. David from NZ
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