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Magic Genie of Love

You own me love most beautiful flowering blossoming woman inside this world to be your genie popping out of a bottle Rubbing me up out of the heart in a magic dazzling puff of magic smoke granting three wishes warm happiness smiles Appears you be the masterful one sweetheart awaiting your commands to be all your feelings and wishes baby wrapped up softly Inside emotions desiring dreams joins sweetly in no time over space star sparkling jewels almost heavenly breathing Whispers in a cool warm gentle breeze and the next thing you know whats coming next one treasure I am all yours honey

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/17/2014 1:05:00 AM

... now if only you could wish for more wishes! This was a nice fun read. I loved reading Aladdin and the Magic Lamp as a kid and the theme of the Genie gives me nostalgia. Well penned!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/17/2014 2:12:00 AM

thank you so much timothy i used to read them books myself as a child wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2014 9:56:00 PM

So romantic, and soft and sweet!!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/16/2014 10:08:00 PM

thank you andrea wonderful comment dear friend heartwarming deeply appreciated smiling

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/16/2014 9:20:00 AM

U'd lovea genie in a bottle.I'll use the three wushes wisely.Two for me and one of them.to set him free.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/16/2014 3:46:00 PM

thank you sweetly charmaine truly very beautiful comment smiling must put the cork back on for the last wish lol bless you dear friend

Joseph May

Date: 10/16/2014 7:16:00 AM

Wonderful write.....my favorite genie was Barbara Eden....Thanks for stopping by

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/16/2014 7:46:00 AM

smiling thank you joseph wonderful comment deeply appreciated god bless

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/16/2014 5:58:00 AM

Oh...to have a genie would be so sweet. Life is hard at times...Your writes always take me to a place where all is filled with beauty and light. Thank you, Liam.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/16/2014 6:10:00 AM

light is the only true beauty that colors eileen brightens our well being warms the insides wonderful comment dear friend thank you kindly bless you pal

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2014 5:11:00 AM

I adore a track called genie in a bottle by Christina Aguilera - the title of your poem drew me in and I loved the romantic write Liam:-) Hugs jan xxx

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/16/2014 6:06:00 AM

thank you jan kindly this i wrote 6 weeks back dear friend missing someone wishing on that dream wonderful comment bless you