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Magic

I close my eyes and I see you Hold out my hands I am touching you I know that you are so far away But in my mind you’re here to stay. It’s magic I can smell your skin after a shower Your hair wet and ruffled like a flower. I can hear the sound of a waterfall The coolness and passion of it all. Its magic. Why do I need to close my eyes Why didn’t I just realize That all I really need to do Is jump on a plane and come to you Now that’s magic. Life is beginning, sad memories past Feeling happy inside and smiling at last. We are together no longer alone Hands held tightly, we make our way home. That’s magical

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/2/2013 10:53:00 PM
Yes the magic continues. The theme of love very strong still. Nice poem, nice thoughts. I have a quote. I need to look of the writer, but here it goes. "Distance is to love as wind is to fire, it kindles the great, it extinguishes the weak." Roger de Bussy-Rabutin, Distance is sometimes referred to as absence.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/3/2013 1:20:00 PM
Just a poem unfortunately..Seren
Date: 5/28/2012 9:50:00 PM
Seren, a few sad feelings, until you reach the end. I like the joy, that magic enhance when it comes to that one feeling, that can answer everything..((just in that one perfect moment, we call ""MAGIC"")), even though you are not talking about a supernatural experience. Love, is the warmest feeling ever... YUP! It should have a name, "Magical"... love the passion,..pd
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Date: 5/27/2012 5:21:00 AM
Absence makes the heart grow fonder - And yet on this I have to ponder! Now clock hands move at such slow pace - But move so fast when we embrace.
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Date: 5/27/2012 5:08:00 AM
That is magical all round.......glad u r united
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Date: 5/27/2012 5:03:00 AM
Oh I do like your poetry Seren ;},,,, you have a blessed day !
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